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Run-On Sentences

A run-on sentence occurs when two or more independent clauses (also known as complete Sentences) are connected improperly.

Correcting Run-On Sentences

A run-on Sentence can be fixed by connecting its parts correctly. There are several ways To connect independent clauses.

·Use A period. The easiest way to fix a run-on is to split the sentence into smaller Sentences using a period. This revision works especially well with longer Sentences. Check, however, to make sure that this solution does not result in Short, choppy sentences.

Revision Example: I love to write papers. I would write one every day if I had the time.

·Use A semicolon. Inserting a semicolon between independent clauses creates a Grammatically correct sentence. Using a semicolon is a stylistic choice that Establishes a close relationship between the two sentences.

Revision Example: I love to write papers; I would write one every day if I had the time.

·Use A comma and a coordinating conjunction. A comma, paired with a coordinating Conjunction (such as and, but, or or), corrects a run-on sentence. This method Emphasizes the relationship between the two clauses.

Revision Example: I love to write papers, and I would write one every day if I had the Time.

·Use A subordinating conjunction. Turn one of the independent clauses into a Dependent clause. A subordinating conjunction (such as because, unless, and Although) connects two clauses to create a complex sentence. This option works To cement the relationship between the two parts of the sentence and may Improve the flow of the clauses.

Example: Because I love to write papers, I would write one every day if I had the time.

Phrase Fragment

A phrase is A group of words lacking a subject or a verb or both. A phrase cannot be Punctuated as a sentence.

Methods of Correcting

·Attach The phrase to a nearby independent clause.

This Example corrects a past-participle phrase fragment.

                Faulty                   Ralph Talked for hours. Elated by the company's success.

                Revised               Ralph Talked for hours, elated by the company's success.

[Use a Comma before a past participle form and remove the capital letter.]

·Change The phrase to an independent clause.

This Example corrects an -ing participle phrase.

                Faulty                   Althea Works every evening. Just trying to keep up with her boss's demands.

                Revised               Althea Works every evening. She is just trying to keep up with her boss's demands.

[Add a Subject and verb.]

·Rewrite The whole passage.

This Example corrects a past participle phrase.

                Faulty                   Ralph Talked for hours. Elated by the company's success.

                Revised               Ralph Was so elated by the company's success that he talked for hours.

[Make the Fragment into a clause and connect it to another clause with a subordinating Word (in this case, one showing a result).]